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  Gilbert ran his index finger down your soft, bare back. It seemed to have no imperfections that he could see with the naked eye. Smiling softly to himself, he once again trailed your spine to your neck. You let out a soft sigh in your sleep and started to shift.

   He pulled his hand back as you turned over to face him, still asleep as you snuggled against his chest comfortably. So this is how we always end up in this position, the Prussian thought to himself with a smirk.

   Gilbert carefully turned onto his back, moving you slightly so that you were laying your head on his chest while he wrapped one arm around your slim waist. This must be what heaven feels like, he mused mentally, too bad I'm going to hell.

    The ceiling of the tan colored tent blocked out the winking stars in the sky, but through the thin material, he could barely make out the sliver of the white moon against a black velvet sky.

    The quarter moon looked peaceful. Of course it's peaceful, it's not down on earth, forced to go through war like the humans, Gilbert thought, but the moon watches us, and it most likely thinks we look amazingly stupid for fighting.

     The Prussian could almost burst into laughter at his poetic thoughts. He wondered if he had spent too much time with Francis before the war, it would surely explain his unintentional bout of deep poetry.

   Suddenly, as if only happening to tear him away from thinking of only himself, something silver flashed from the corner of his eye. He glanced over, immediately spotting the blue and black iron cross necklace. It was an award. It represented his years of military service and valiance. It represented his years of killing.

    Then Gilbert turned his attention to you, pulling the blanket up past your shoulder blades, for it must be cold. Yes, he felt a chill, but after a while of sleeping in tents in a frosty air, he was used to a small breeze. You looked so peaceful, so at rest against him.

    Do you approve of me, (Name)? He asked himself that question, not being able to tear the frown away from his lips. Am I everything you ever wanted? Do you approve of my war?

    Deep down, the answer he knew would come is 'no'. He didn't even approve of it much, but something unknown kept him going along with Ludwig, even though his little brother has changed signifigantly from the calm man he used to be.

     This war has changed people. Even me....

    Gilbert layed his head back on the hard pillow, returning his eyes to the tan fabric of the tent, attempting to focus on sleep for tomorrow would be another hard day. Another hard day, another medal to be awarded, another person to kill, another strategy to plan, another march through Europe, another moment that he's not with you.

     Just another day...  he thought, tomorrow.... I'll tell Ludwig I'm done.
So I'm in the mood for a dramatic Prussia thingy... This is set towards the end of WWII... and there are mentions of Nazi! Germany...

I just got really poetic like in this... I didn't even mean too...

I woke up this morning holding onto my dog... I was spooning with my dog... and for some reason... this action gave me Prussia feels. It just reminded me of Prussia for some reason...

I guess it doesn't help that I was watching a butt load of documentaries about WWII before I fell asleep...

And it's a true story bro about how the iron cross necklace is a war medal. I looked that shit up.

I have a feeling that I'd be good at writing angsty war stuff... Imma make a series now... all the Axis and Allies thoughts during WWII.... yeah, look for that shit.
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The-UnRealIstic Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow um my god Prussia that realled tugged my heartstrings
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Photoneyesdragon Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel sad. . . Is this foreshadowing Prussia's 'death'?about to cry emote Crying Mako 
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Bakuranom Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
WAIT
NOW I'M DEPRESSED
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BrazilTheAwesome Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Part two or I'll dieee and I'll go from Happy Kagura Troll Face Plz  to angryBipolar You don't want that D:
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sharinganshanobi Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MOAR PLEASEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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zoethegreat8668 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014   General Artist
LOVE LOVE LOVE!
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Wafflepigs Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Part 2 part2 part 2 part 2 part 2 part 2
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CanadaWannaBeFriend Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg you're AWESOME!! Just not as awesome as Prussia!! XD X3
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MeineKleineBlume Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I really, REALLY loved this! It's so sad, but then again it's so good! Great job! :iconsnugplz:
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creepypastalover01 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconmoarplz:
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AskMontreal Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
;-; oh lord please hold me tight you friggin warlord
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Hinatathebloom1 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Loved it ^w^
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AnnaBella125 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
*starts bawling* This-this was so perfect!!! :cries:
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MiraakTheDragonborn Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student General Artist
For some reason,this came in my mind:

English or proper people who stick out their pinkies when they drink something are secretly flipping off a Spaniard and an Italian or whoever..

Yeah..

Anyway,COOL BRO BRO.
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JazzyLick Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
LOL I spoon with my dog all the time. Usually I find her in this warm, fluffy little black ball, squeal in my brain, then lay down next to her and just sit there for a while.
OMG SHES SO CUTE :iconsocuteplz:
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CanadaWannaBeFriend Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL me too!!! ;) ;D X3
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SierraChanTheNeko Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Very well written!
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josievital Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
im cring
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MizuVargas Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Student Writer
So sad yet so good! :iconcryforeverplz:
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YuriAkita Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this!! But....Not okay!! Make me sad!!! But great job!!!
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Tsubasa1hiroge Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
BTW, your profile picture looks like a constipated Latvia.
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LittleMissRoxy03 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
LOL
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Tsubasa1hiroge Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I want to hug something...
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malentia Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this moved me :)
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Yasaijiru7 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww so sweet!
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Okki-Knight Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*sniffle* Tch! The awesome me wouldn't say something like this! Y-You're all delusional!
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Skitsophraniac Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
hehe, don't deny it! You're just a big softie =3=
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Okki-Knight Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AM NOT!! " When I get sad, I just stop being sad and......
BE AWESOME INSTEAD :D "
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jambalambam Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I was thinking of how deep this fanfiction is and then...I saw your ID picture...and the I lol'd. :D
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Mizu1993 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional General Artist
I love it :iconiloveitplz: So cute :iconyayprussiaplz:
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FunkiestOhio66 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012
That's deep Prussia... :iconimsorryplz:
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MadamofCraziness Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
Wow, I wouldn't have expected this from Prussia!
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KikiWolfHeart Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Why?! NOOOOOO... Darn you~! You brought me tears.
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livinanotherworld Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this! can't wait for more~
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AAAAAWWWWW!!!!!!! I love you, Prussia!!! No matter what!!
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CarsonMasterson Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wonderful and dont worry we all think philosophical shit when we are trying to..sleep. Continue please!
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Dravenkirkland Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
You should continue this.
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diamondcatlenny Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
When I read the title, I was just trying to figure out what was going to happen like 'that's a bit creepy.' More so with my family staring over my shoulder. But then it was this. It's a lot better than some of the things my sister yelled to my brothers I was reading. Nope, this is wonderful.
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mikumiku963 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
;-; You have just made me cry.

And smarter.
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Skitsophraniac Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2012
and smarter? How?
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:iconmikumiku963:
mikumiku963 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012
By what the cross means.
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Jean-Sabaku Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
I love this :)
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nightwing6497 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
it is such an awesome fic!!
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DenimPanda Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
I'm forcing myself to think happy thoughts,I've read too much fiction where Gilbert dies,it's no good for my mood çwç
However,it's beautiful and romantic,you are a good writer ^w^
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Animeboyloveramy Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
This is so cute~ and really rather beautiful~ I loved it

I look forwards to more of them
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Diamondsnake Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...no comments!?

This is such a good story, it needs more attention. Well written and edited, loved it.
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