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  You held up the soft cloth dress to inspect it a bit closer. It had no straps and was made specially to push up your boobs for a tempting and large preview.

  You let the dress fall back down to the bed and gazed at yourself in the full-body hotel mirror. A frumpy gray shirt covered your chest, the ends almost reaching down to the knees of your baggy jeans. In this outfit, you looked like you had no boobs, and no butt.

   "(Name), the awesome me is going down to the bar," Gilbert yelled through your door while knocking obnoxiously, "if you're going to be seen with me, then you're going to have to at least try and look like a girl!"

   That was it. You finally snapped.

   You were tired of Gilbert constantly critisizing your clothes and unstyled hair. You liked to dress for comfort, and you wouldn't exactly be able to chase after the idiotic Prussian all day in high-heels, could you?

   So he wanted to see you look like a real girl? Then you'd give him the girliest girl he'd ever seen. Or, at least the girliest girl you could manage. Yes. The girliest girl you could manage.

    The high-heels sitting in your suitcase that was opened up on the bed seemed to bore a whole through your soul. Okay, maybe you could be the girliest girl you could manage without having to wear devices of torture on your feet. Yes, it was perfect.


    Gilbert took another long swig of his beer, letting the sensational tongue-loosener drain down his throat. He eyed nearby girls, finding none who really caught his full attention. Gilbert was picky when it came to women.

    His meeting with Alfred had ended about an hour ago. Now the albino man was just sitting by himself at a two-person table, waiting for you to show up.

    You were probably in your room still, crying about your weight or attempting to look like a decent human-being, he assumed. Gilbert really did have a soft spot for you, he just never showed it. That would mean showing weakness to the enemy. If you ever found out that he cared even just a little bit about your feelings, you'd hold it to him for the rest of his life.

    He had been feeling odd lately, though. You got along well with Ludwig, and when Gil would hear you and his little brother share a laugh, he'd always had the weirdest temptation to go take you away from Ludwig and share his own little laughs with you, to make memories and inside jokes with you.

    It was an incredibly girly feeling.

    A high-pitched wolf whistle broke Gil from his thoughts. He glanced up from his drink in hopes that a girl who was finally pretty enough for him had entered the bar.

    But instead he found you.

    Or at least he thought it was you.

    You stood beside the doorway of the bar, a skimpy red dress out-lining your perfectly placed curves. Your breasts were pushed up into two tempting mounds. Your legs seemed to go on forever. Your hair curled and touchable, the kind of hair Gilbert wanted to run his hands through.

    You might as well have been naked.

    You glanced around the room uncertainly, an embarassed blush gracing your cheeks. Gilbert stared silently at you some more, wondering just how drunk he was.

    Your eyes finally landed on him and you strode towards him, not in high-heels, but a comfortable and overly-worn pair of black, drawn on converse that you always wore with jeans.

    "Hey, Gil," you greeted, pulling out the chair across from him and taking a seat, "do I look good enough to hang out with you?" Your tone was bitter, mocking.

    Gilbert's red eyes flickered across your body, right up to your make-upped face, but not before they lingered on the boobs he never knew you had. "You look...awesome, (Name)."

     "I damn well better look awesome," you muttered as you shifted in your seat uncomfortably, "I have to wear a thong with this dress and it's annoying as hell."

    Gilbert was suddenly intensly curious as to what color said thong was. How it looked on your perfectly sculpted ass, how it would look lying on the floor after he rips it off with his teeth. "Let me buy you a drink, (Name)."
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DerpressedKitty Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
That moment when you don't drink like 'No. I don't drink. Thanks for attempting to get in my pants but no. Just. No.' Lel
amliajane12345 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Student General Artist
Parissimmons Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
Oh no be careful reader he has perv thoughts fryplz
gab226789 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Student Writer

Spaz attack                       I SHALL ASSUME MY ULTIMATE FORM

                                                       Masato Inohara (Amazing cooking skillz) [V7] 
Tairulz Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Just reading that comment made me laugh XD
gab226789 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student Writer
Yeah because God knows Ima need to go all super saiyan all over Gil after he buys me a drink if he tries anything XD
Tairulz Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I almost pity him.... ALMOST hahahahhahahahaha XD
MiraakTheDragonborn Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Student General Artist


14pip14 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
YUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CONVERSE ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! AND PERFECT WITH DRESSES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! my mom makes me wear really high torture devises that she thinks are 'lady like'.
littleblue-2041 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
I even wore converse to my cousins aunt still calls me 'un-lady like's I made the clever remark of 'who are you? Fem England? Geeze I thought you were Scottish like the me!'
14pip14 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
OMFG!! Your Scottish? So lucky!!
littleblue-2041 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
It's a curse when you live in England *shudderds* so posh and proper! They Donny even accept my money! It took me a whole year to learn basic english and even now I screw it up... but thank you! I'm very patriotic!
14pip14 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
Hee hee! Well England can shove a scone up his buttocks cuz Scotland is way awesomer
littleblue-2041 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
I've got a slight felling Iggy fans are gonna be after me now... 
Thank you by the way! You just made my sucky day better!Huggle! 
14pip14 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014
Your welcome!
FMAandKHfangirl Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Student Filmographer
O//////A//////O *melts* oh goodness.
I love how you capture his personality, a lot of reader inserts make the characters too mushy gushy and lovey and perfect, ignoring their personality quirks
blacknpink1099 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
I agree :D
KikiWolfHeart Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:iconwtfboomplz: AWESOME.
Arletix Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
oh my... i'm worried for myself... xD
tho... IN YOUR FACE GILLBERT!! :iconlikeabossplz:
Maplegirl16 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
I would never wear that. It has to be blue cuz I look like shit in red.
Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
interesting ~
Varsa-svasa Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012
I wonder wat happens next.....
:iconomgwtfbbqplz: please hurry with the next one. Dun leave me hanging
fox334o4 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconohfuckplz: RUN AWAY
sexyanimelover Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lemon? Please?! *think These where this is going...
Skitsophraniac Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
Sorry darlings~ No lemons, but something else that might surprise you.
AnimeAngel416 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student General Artist
I think I know where this is going...
Puppiluvr Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
lol Make him work for it!!!.....the deny him at the last minute, he deserves it the perv XD
denmarkmylove Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
ohhhh gilly might get some
Shadowy-Nights Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i sense a drunk lemon~ XD
guineapiggy202 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omg this is so awesome~!
meggie722 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Professional Artist
Lol my new faveorite series lol
this is awesome
MisakiAyzawa Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
oh no shits gunna go down soon!
AlphonseElricsWife Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student Filmographer
This is funny great story so far!
tsayumi Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
gil: :iconsexyprussia2plz: if you must know. now stop with the bedroom eyes

I love this so far!
darkdragonrose99 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
Hahaha I'm loving this!
Magzpagz Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012
:iconitsbeautifulplz: .....Next.....chapter.......please......<3
Aki-Chan53 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't wait for the next one~
Ask---London Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Please make another the story is AWESOME!~
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